DESIGN RESEARCH DISSERTATION - RESEARCH FOR ARTICLE PUBLICATION

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18.11.2022 - 11.12.2022 (Week 12 - Week 15)
Devina Angeline Wiratama / 0350824
Design Research Dissertation / Bachelor of Design (Hons) in Creative Media
Assignment 3: Research for Article Publication
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ASSIGNMENT 3: RESEARCH FOR ARTICLE PUBLICATION

Students are to:
1 Adapt their dissertation into a concise paper suitable for publication, adhering to The Design School KREATE journal's requirements.
2 The description in KREATE journal
3 Students as the author are to download the KREATE Raw Input template with the specific font to be used, and the authors are not allowed to edit the format set in the template as described in the
Manuscript Preparation Guide of the journal.

LECTURE NOTES & READING MATERIALS

WEEK 12 / 18.11.2022

Dissertation into Article
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Turn Thesis into Article
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How to write a research paper.
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PRACTICAL (W12-W14)

Before I start, this is the reference and the typeface that I need to use.

Fig. 2.1 / Reference and Typeface, Week 12 (18.11.2022)

Here is my progress.

Attempt #1

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Attempt #2

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Attempt #3

After receiving the last feedback from Dr Hayati, here is my final result.
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FEEDBACK

WEEK 13 - 25/11/2022
  • General:
    - Try to finish the article as soon as possible because it’s a big mark, 30%
    - Choose one of your research questions for the article. Focus on one of them.

  • Specific:
    - Remove the second paragraph of your introduction.
    - Add more to the problem statement about the literature review
    - Combine the tables (literature and finding)
    - Bring the table to the article and it could be your discussion.

WEEK 14 - 02/12/2022
  • General:
    - Don’t forget to submit your TURNITIN

  • Specific:
    - May consider changing the title

WEEK 15 - 09/12/2022
  • General:
    - Don't forget to submit the article
    - Don't forget to submit a reflection and report

  • Specific:
    - Here is the feedback from Dr Hayati.
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REFLECTION

WEEK 13 - 25/11/2022
All feelings of fear, anxiety, worry, and pessimism become one this week. I have lots of assignments to complete and I'm afraid I won't be able to complete them on time. When I wanted to revise my journal article, I was still confused about what Dr Hayati said because there were quite disturbing voices behind Dr Hayati. After I've listened to it over and over, I've caught a few and I hope they're true. Also this week I tried to submit my dissertation draft to TURNITIN, and I was really scared. What if the plagiarism exceeds 15%? When I saw the results I got 13%, almost haha. But when I looked at them one by one, it turned out that what I forgot to rephrase was only 3%.

WEEK 14 - 02/12/2022
I am grateful to have completed the design research dissertation. I'm the type of person who can't write or read a lot of things. So I'm very grateful that I got through all of this and was able to finish it. I learned how to phrase a sentence, not be too to the point in writing papers, learned to be patient, learned to be steadfast, and can accept criticism and improve myself. I am also grateful to have been assisted and guided by Dr Hayati. I observe how Dr Hayati's workload is very large and heavy, but she still provides feedback to me and my classmates carefully and precisely. So whenever I get feedback from her, I always feel it makes sense and is acceptable. Hopefully, she is in good health always.

Here is the full version.

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